Daily Nourishment for October 29, 2024: Words for Autumn with Guidance from Lauren Winner

Daily Nourishment Read Time: 35 seconds
Pause/Prompt/Practice Time: 15 minutes


A Note from Lauren: This week’s offerings will be calendar-themed, as we move toward All Hallows’ Eve and All Saints’ Day.

Pause.


For a minute or so, let your breath slow as you gaze on this image.

 

Prompt.

I recently learned that Japanese haiku often include a word to indicate the season. Some of the words that most often indicate autumn are (once translated into English) moon, and names of various fall fruits, like persimmons

Mushroom gathering —
the heads are full
as the peak of the moon

(Buson, translated  by Allan Persinger)

persimmon leaves
turn Buddha-colored…
then fall

(Issa, translated by David G. Lanoue)


How do these poems make your body feel?  

 

Practice.

Part One:

Brainstorm five or six objects, not necessarily from the natural world, that could serve as an autumnal keyword in a short poem.

Part Two:

A haiku is a short poem that typically juxtaposes two images or two sensory evocations. (Contra what many of us learned in grade school, haiku don’t necessarily hew to a five-seven-five syllable count.)

autumn is cool:
let each hand set to peeling 
melons and eggplants.

(Basho, translated by David Landis Barnhill)

water in the vase
on our daughter's grave—
a passing car

(Lenard D. Moore)

Write an autumn haiku, or two.


Want More?
Here’s a wonderful article about a 13th-century ink painting of persimmons.

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Today’s Daily Nourishment was provided by Lauren Winner. Lauren Winner is a writer, professor, Episcopal Priest, & spiritual director.
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